User talk:WardyLion

Welcome
Hi, welcome to Thunderbolt Black Wiki! Thanks for your edit to the Adam Ward ('Semtex') page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- Silverfox Blade (Talk) 20:53, October 25, 2010

Hey mate, your page is looking good - although I didn't realise you had such an extensive re-working of your history in mind.

Now that you've changed it from what you've already established in game, it's actually upset a lot of stuff Ultra and I had actually planned for your character based on the original history you'd set out (i.e., involving MultiCorp being after Wardy's parents, rather than the HFH, and him trying to hide from them).

Also, I'd take a bit of a look at your skills - they do come across a bit, um... well, much. If you'd like him to be more competent at ground skills, that's fine - certainly, it fits in nicely with being a more instinctive and less technically skilled pilo (and that'd be a nice direction to take character development), but I'd drop the reference to being 'Qualified in almost all forms of winged aircraft' as a tradeoff, since it sounds a bit much.

Just thought I'd better point that out, as it stood out to me a little.